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Hyuk Jae x Reader [Nice Guys Finish Last] Part 5

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Your P.O.V

You and Hyuk Jae were now together for a few days and something really started to bother you. It seemed like he didn't care at all. At first you liked that idea but now, it hurt you. You actually wanted him to care and be nice to you. And so you were going to tell him as soon as possible.

Then you saw Hyuk Jae walking on the other side of the street but, he was with Donghae, so telling him right now was impossible.

You quickly walked away before they saw you. You went to your house and started to listen to music to forget about everything.

But the music that you listened to didn't make it any better, it actually made you feel worse. It was super juniors No Other.

You felt really bad, you didn't want to hurt him, but you actually wanted him to be the sweet, kind-hearted boy he was before. The one you had been friends with for so long, the boy that fell in love with you.

Hyuk Jae's P.O.V

But behind the scenes,
She means the world to me!
I wanna tell her thats she's beautiful,
And show her that she's loved!
Hold her hand when shes scared,
Tell her how much I care,
But that won't win her heart because,

Nice guys finish last thats,
Why I'll treat you like trash it's,
Not what I really want to do!
You only date bad guys so,
I'll give it my best try to,
Treat you the way you want me to!


I'm going to tell her how I feel and pray that she still will be my girlfriend after I told her, was the only thing you could think about.

I refuse to treat her like this any longer, I love her and I don't want to hurt her.

You decided to go to her house and tell her how you felt. You were quite nervous but it was the best for both of you.

On your way to her house you bought a bouquet of roses by a small stand, to give to _____ since roses were her favorite flowers.

You finally were close to her house and you really felt like running away, what if she didn't want your relationship to continue or what if she already found someone else, someone who could fulfill her wishes.  

You were trembling as you walked to her door but noticed she saw you out of her window, you really couldn't go away now.

Your P.O.V

As you were looking out of the window you saw Hyuk Jae walking to your door and you heard him rang the bell.

You went downstairs and opened the door.

There was Hyuk Jae with a bouquet of roses. He stared at the ground and started to talk.

Hyuk Jae's P.O.V

"I must convince her to stay with me, I mean she must like me since she asked me to be her boyfriend..." was all that was on your mind.

As _____ opened the door you didn't know where to look, so you just looked at the ground and started to talk.

"_____, err there is something I want to tell you. The way I treated you the past few days… that's not how I really am. I ain't a bad boy, I acted that way because you told me you liked bad boys, but now I feel really bad for treating you this way. I don't want to treat you like trash. I love you so much. But you never liked me until I became a "bad boy" version of myself. I just can't keep this image up, it's not how I really am. I hope you still want to be my girlfriend even if I'm not the bad boy you liked…" you said with a trembling voice.

When you finally told her everything you felt really relieved and you looked up, afraid to see _____'s reaction.

When your eyes met you noticed she was about to cry and you wrapped your arms around her to comfort her.

First she tried to push you away, but before she really pushed she laid her head on your shoulder and shed some tears.

She let go of you, took a step back and told you how she felt about it.

Your P.O.V

As Hyuk Jae started talking you really wanted to hug him, he looked so cute trying to apologize and you wondered why you never felt something for this sweet, kind-hearted guy before. He was just perfect. You didn't even care his "bad boy" image was a lie, you loved this guy and wanted to be with his for the rest of your life.

"Err, Hyuk Jae, I must admit I've been really stupid. I thought bad boys were cool, but now I see they're just stupid. I want a sweet, kind-hearted boy, who cares about me and loves me… someone like you. I really don't understand why I didn't fell for you before. You're perfect and I hope you err want to be my boyfriend even after I asked you to change yourself. It was really selfish of me to do that kind of things to you," you said.

Hyuk Jae looked at you and you saw his expression change.

He wrapped his arms around you once again, moved his face to you face until his lips were just an inch removed from your ear and whispers "Saranghae, _____".
Well this is "part" 5 of my Hyuk Jae series.

It's not really a part, it's just an alternative ending for those who don't like bad endings.

I must admit I kinda prefer this ending, but that's just because I'm a jewel and I would never do something to hurt my hyukkie :iconsaranghaeplz: :iconeunhyukplz:

Hope you guys like this ending as wel.

You can expect a lot of Hyuk Jae fics to come in 2013

Sorry if there are any mistakes but I really wanted to upload this before New Year.

The song this fanfic is based on is Nice Guys Finish Last [link]

Hyuk Jae (c) Super Junior
Super Junior (c) SMtown
Nice Guys Finish Last (c) Nigahiga

Preview Picture is not mine.

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Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4 (official ending): [link]
Part 5 (alternative ending): You're here
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SkyWarriorKirby's avatar
Hyukkie~ you're supposed to be kind-hearted in the first place so don't be a bad boy ;=;

I loved it xD